Final Draft For Double Page Spread

My final draft for my double page spread.
The changes I have made with my double page spread is making the header stand out more and more readable so what I did was add a black rectangle behind the text so it would stand out from the photograph. I have also changes the text on the flannel so that the text from the title header and the answers that my artist gives. I have also added who took to photograph on the right bottom corner as it is a part of a convention that I forgot to add when I did the first draft.
I think my 2nd draft is a lot more successful than the first one because I mainly made improvements which worked really well as now the conventions of a double page spread are much more professional and they stand out more such as the header and the flannel.